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On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?

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PostSubject: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Mon Jul 16, 2007 5:58 pm

Walking test


Easing test: this one isn't supposed to look like it hit the ground or anything, just a regular easing test.


Spacing test


Punching test


Easing tutorial (youtube)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=WciSPLp5LEE

A guy running, then falling 0.o


Shading thingy test


Running test


Running test


Punching test


Straight Kick test


Punch-Chop-Stance Combo


Sloppy Skateboarding Animation for a Collab
http://www.filefactory.com/file/1f1543/

PS: I did NOT steal the new tests on the list, however, I DID animate them after a close study of Baha's tutorial.
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:24 pm

i rated pretty dang bad but thats because you just started pivot, theirs no way you can be really good when you just start it takes months to get really good like it does with any animating program(examples: flash, easytoon, tisfat, endorphin, etc.)
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Fri Jul 27, 2007 11:19 pm

lol, your first one was in slow motion! XD
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Sat Sep 15, 2007 11:12 pm

I voted for "Not too bad...", I'm actually one who sees everything positive, anyway. Wink

Try not to use movement with the same spacing over and over again.
I have a simple formula on how to make easing almost perfectly for almost each situation:

For rather slow movements:
Multiply 1 with 2, then 2 with 2, etc.

For medium fast movements:
Multiply 1 with 3, etc.

For heavy spacing \ gravity:
Multiply 1 with 4, etc.

Where the number to be multiplied is always one pixel.
Also, always set up a maximum speed!

Also, stiffness is just a little bit here... try working on it a bit more.
Also, to make it look even smoother try onion-skin trailing (move a bone forward but make the outer bones point to their last location).

And don't try to make unrealistic movements \ impossible movements, they're weird >.<

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Also, there should be definitely a rule for posting constructive criticism!
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PostSubject: k7   Sun Sep 16, 2007 12:26 am

Not bad....not bad at all Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:56 pm

base your votes on the one that you think is the best please. Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Sun Oct 21, 2007 1:28 pm

i would say now your pretty good, youve improved alot since ive last seen your animation im gonna give you a med-beginner level almost high-beginner keep it up man!
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Mon Oct 22, 2007 9:10 pm

pivotelite wrote:
i would say now your pretty good, youve improved alot since ive last seen your animation im gonna give you a med-beginner level almost high-beginner keep it up man!
Thanks! I wish I had your inters rank >.< Lol.
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Sat Oct 27, 2007 5:32 am

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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Tue Nov 06, 2007 2:28 am

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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Sat Nov 24, 2007 1:13 am

arnt the last ones baha's?
other than that wayyy to stiff
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Sat Nov 24, 2007 4:31 pm

EMMDM wrote:
arnt the last ones baha's?
other than that wayyy to stiff


Look at the bottom of the thread, I made them after looking at his tutorial, and the others are old.
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Sat Nov 24, 2007 6:17 pm

ohh sry didnt read that part just makin sure..or i wouldv taddled on you..lol what ever
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Thu Dec 06, 2007 2:48 am

dude im sorry but low beginner to choppy
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Thu Dec 06, 2007 12:52 pm

Lordzpivot wrote:
dude im sorry but low beginner to choppy


What? LOW beginner?
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:30 pm

jk jk i think med begginer your starting at low though
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:32 pm

the one were hes running than following you need to fix it theres something wrong with it.
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Thu Dec 06, 2007 10:10 pm

Lordzpivot wrote:
the one were hes running than following you need to fix it theres something wrong with it.


I know, it's the running mainly. I was told to do it like that, and I realized it was horrible like that >.<
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PostSubject: Re: On a scale of 1 - 10.. What do you rate my animations?   Wed May 07, 2008 6:51 pm

Based on what I've seen so far I say high beginner. Not inter by almost. My favorite is probably the combo thing. 8 on the combo Razz
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